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Lunnaria-Shirayuri 's Papyrus!

 Lune's Ref:  Papyrus Concept Art by Lunnaria-Shirayuri
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Uh hello! This is my first critique so.. yeah.....
I really loved how this picture turned out, You drew Runes!Papyrus really well and matches with its original ref sheet, I can see that you first sketched with pencil and outlined it with a sharpie. But when you outlined it, it wasn't clean and to me still kinda a sketch (Sorry I'm really bad at Critques). I suggest Try making cleaner lines :3.beside that the coloring and shading is alright with me and everything looks fantastic you did a great job. Could use a little more work on the shading but I still love it!